Monday, September 29, 2008

Pakhandi Akhyan : Nayeda

(Pakhandi ka shabdik arth hai: Chhali/Dhongi. Kuchh innocent pakhandi bhi hoten hai
jo swantsukhay pakhandi hote hai yane bahurupiye...jinhe enjoy kiya jata hai. Magar
Chhaliya Dhongi bahut khatarnak hoten hai ghun ki tarha jahan lagte hai us dane
ko khokhla kar deten hai...kavita ke nayak/nayika aise dhongi-chhaliya hai, unhe
pahchanane men yah rachna madad kar sakegi to iski kamyabi hogi.

Yahan istemal sortha shaili-Rajasthani bhasha ke kavi 'Rajiya' se prerit hai. Aek Udaharan:

"Kali ghani kurup, kasturi kanta tule
Shakkar ghani surup, roda tule Rajiya."

Kasturi ka rang kala hota hai, kurup si lagati hai,magar itni kimati hoti hai isliye sethji apne haton use chhoti si tula par tol-ten hai....Chini safed hoti hai aur sundar bhi dikhti hai lekin use bojha dhone wale shramik pathron se tolte hai.......gun prabal aur pramukh hoten hai. Ismen kurup aur surup ka tuk milta hai......aur dono panktiyon ka aant atukant hai. )

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Pakhandi Akhyan

Sada rahe baichain, chintan swarath din-nishi
Bhule apne ben, Jab ghadi aaye swa-dhyey ki.

Meethi bhasa bolkar, duhe matalab har ghadi
Garal visham gholkar, deve pyali mridu pey ki.

Jiwan hua jatil, kunthit man tan ang-pratyang
Swabhav hua kutil, hai drishti bas nij dhyey ki.

Dekh auron ka mel, man hi man irshya kare
Khele bhonda khel, aur baten kare agyey ki.

Sankirna hai vichar, bhasan audarya ka kare
Kritim hai aachar,hai mithya stuti shradhyey ki.

Leela aparampar, fareb makkari sar chadhe
Baten barambar, kare achourya aur asteya ki.

Heen bhavna hriday base, dambhi vikat swabhav
Bhram pravanchna asat hansi, chinta kare na dey ki.

Pakhandpurna vyvahar,samjhe sudhee jan shighra
De saday kshma uphar, kare na apeksha shrey ki.

Audarya=udarta asteya/achourya=chori na karna

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